Tonight, Let Me Kiss You

This is Saturday
the time I wait of all days
Under the sky, we sit
singing the love song you ever made
declaring the promise we ever said
talking about the sweetest poems we ever wrote

I am sure that you still remember
the day I held your hands and kissed your cheek
You smiled and run
run away, stay away from me

Tonight, let me kiss you
to tell you that I love you so
Tonight let me kiss your lips
to tell you that I dont wanna lose you

3 comments:

  1. Kiss me..
    sixpence none the richer..

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  2. This is Saturday
    the time I wait of all day(s)
    Under the sky, we sit
    singing the love song you ever made
    declaring the promise we ever said
    talking about the sweetest poems we ever wrote

    I am sure that you still remember
    the day I held your hands and kiss(ed) you(r) cheek
    You smiled and run
    run away, stay away from me


    Some of the "grammar" need to be revised.
    Cek yang ditambah di dalam () ya...

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  3. thanks ya mbakq..:) ntar dikoreksi deh.. :) maklum dalam masa pertumbuhan,, hahaha

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