Tonight, Let Me Kiss You

This is Saturday
the time I wait of all days
Under the sky, we sit
singing the love song you ever made
declaring the promise we ever said
talking about the sweetest poems we ever wrote

I am sure that you still remember
the day I held your hands and kissed your cheek
You smiled and run
run away, stay away from me

Tonight, let me kiss you
to tell you that I love you so
Tonight let me kiss your lips
to tell you that I dont wanna lose you

3 comments for "Tonight, Let Me Kiss You"

Unknown 29 October 2011 at 18:33 Delete Comment

Kiss me..
sixpence none the richer..

Anonymous 16 November 2011 at 18:07 Delete Comment

This is Saturday
the time I wait of all day(s)
Under the sky, we sit
singing the love song you ever made
declaring the promise we ever said
talking about the sweetest poems we ever wrote

I am sure that you still remember
the day I held your hands and kiss(ed) you(r) cheek
You smiled and run
run away, stay away from me

Some of the "grammar" need to be revised.
Cek yang ditambah di dalam () ya...

Unknown 18 November 2011 at 13:09 Delete Comment

thanks ya mbakq..:) ntar dikoreksi deh.. :) maklum dalam masa pertumbuhan,, hahaha

Good comments are very needed